8 thoughts on “Poem: Frozen

  1. I like the sparseness of the word choice. It highlights the panic, fear and uncertainty the person “I” feels. The only word that jarred was ‘photographed’, personally I would have used ‘caught or captured’, but that’s just my take on it.

    LJ

      1. Ah it’s all good, practise makes perfect as they say… and perfect poems are boring! I’m putting up the lyrical sunday prompt today… any suggestions on what you’d like to write about?

        Have a great day!

  2. I like the sparseness of the word choice. It highlights the panic, fear and uncertainty the person “I” feels. The only word that jarred was ‘photographed’, personally I would have used ‘caught or captured’, but that’s just my take on it.

    LJ

      1. Ah it’s all good, practise makes perfect as they say… and perfect poems are boring! I’m putting up the lyrical sunday prompt today… any suggestions on what you’d like to write about?

        Have a great day!

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